Monday, February 15, 2010

A Penguin's Pool

Toreka has shared her recount introduction about her chilly visit to the pools:

How can penguins do it? How can they swim in such cold water?
The water I swam in was no where near as cold as a penguin's. It didn't help one bit that my brother was splashing it into my face. I can't believe I came out alive. One word - COLD!!
My little brother had been crying to go to the pools. But I'm glad my Dad agreed. If he didn't, I wouldn't have been on the deck frying like a sunny-side egg in the morning. That's before I went in the water...


Seini-Mino said...

Hi Toreka,

I really like your animation about you at the pools. I also loved the graphics you used, You are a very artistic person. Your introduction is very interesting and you hooked me in straight away. Keep it up Toreka!

From Seini-Mino

Sylvia said...

To Toreka,

Your animations about the pools were brilliant and same goes with your writing! I liked the way you used a lot of detail around the pools and how you did a fantastic job with the illustrations! I also liked your the way your writing hooked me in straight away. Keep up the good work Toreka!

From Sylvia!