Wednesday, February 17, 2010
Erene's Holiday Highlight
On our way to the Motat a little jingle went up my spine and I remembered how fun it was the last time I came. It was spectacular, amazing and most brilliant.
Me, my brother, Mum, Dad and little sister were going on Highway 1 to Motat, but then we turned to pick up my cousins Selila and Sam. We were going to Motat to enjoy the holiday.
Erene
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Your phrase "a little tingle went up my spine" is a great way to express that exciting feeling when you are anticipating something, well done.
I would have liked to see some of Motat in your animation as it was the topic of your recount. That would have hooked me in even more as your audience.
I look forward to your next piece of work on the blog Erene.
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