Aidan has shared his excited feelings about going to the beach to create excitement in his introduction.
Here is the introduction to his holiday recount:
Yeah! I said to myself as I got to the beach and the waves were enormous. I got to the next wave and it got bigger and bigger and then I got dumped like a bat getting hit. "Are you all right?" said my sister.
3 comments:
Fakaalofa Lahi Atu Aidan,
That was a great animation you created their of your holiday. What beach did you go to?
We look forward to seeing more of your work posted on your blog. Well done.
Miss Lavakula
Kia ora Aidan
Wow what a great hook to your holiday recount! I like the way you explained being dumped because I too have experienced that at a beach up North called Matauri Bay. I will show your hook to one of my writing groups to show them what a good hook looks like. Thanks Aidan and keep up the great writing - Ms T x
Fakaalofa Lahi Atu, Aidan,
Fantastic animation and recount!. I do recall our last visit to Langs Beach, where the waves were quite huge and it was fun. Most definitely one of the best beaches up North.
Your visit to Waipu Cove sounds really exciting and alot of fun. Especially going on the boogie board.
Very much looking forward to more great stories, keep up the great work.
Love, Taulagi Teleso xxx
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