Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Cruz goes to the Beach

Cruz has been trying to write an introduction which hooks in his audience, and orientates them about what he is writing about.
He has shared his recount introduction here with you.
video
While we were jumping up and down waiting to go to Maraiti Beach, my cousin was moaning and groaning. I thought it was going to be boring but it turned out to be quite an adventure...

5 comments:

Miss Garden said...

Were you jumping up and down with excitement, as well as thinking your trip was going to be boring? I am a little confused.
I like the phrase "it turned out to be quite an adventure" it makes me want to read more about the adventure.
Miss Garden

Room14 said...

Wow that was cool.I wish I went to the beach because that looks like fun.

Mary V.

Aidan said...

Hi cruz

I saw your movie and it was great.
What Beach did you go to?
It must of been great fun for you and your family .

I well be looking ford to seeing your next movie.
Keep up the good work Cruz.

Aidan

Aidan said...

Hi cruz

I saw your movie and it was great.
What Beach did you go to?
It must of been great fun for you and your family .

I well be looking ford to seeing your next movie.
Keep up the good work Cruz.

Aidan

Aidan said...

Hi Cruz.

I really liked your movie about
you at the beach. What beach did you go to Cruz?

Well I am going now but keep up the good work.
From Aidan