Sunday, August 23, 2009

Litia's new ending

We have been learning about the structure of narrative stories and
this is Litia's own ending to Little Red Riding Hood.
If you need a reminder or the story orientation and complication click on this link to see the trailer to our resolution writing.


NZWaikato said...

I love the ending Litia! Its great to have comedy in there and I laughed out aloud when you wrote that the Wolf had gone to start growing his own vegetables!

SHARON said...

Hi Litia,

That was a great story about Little Red Riding Hood.
I couldn't stop laughing when you said that the wolf cried because his leg landed on a stick.
It was fun to read and that it made me want to read it more and more.
I hope that I see another awesome story that you have wrote.

Bye For Now

From SHARON in room 17

Manaiakalani said...

Like Mr Webb, I think that having to grow and eat your own vegetables is a fitting punishment for a wolf :) You have written a wonderful new ending to this story with so much detail in it that I thought it should be made into a movie. Well done.
Mrs Burt

Anonymous said...

Hi Litia

what an awsome story. well written and i just wanted to read more hehe so funny he had to grow his own vegetables in the end, that i think was a great ending. looking forward to reading more from you.

shoals mum