Mathew R's Holiday Highlight

We have been learning to write recount introductions that hook in, and orientate our audience.
Check out Mathew's introduction and see how he has done this:



The Invader!

Have you been on the brand new Hell Chasing Invader at Rainbow's End?
It twists your body round the world, and is a spine busting, neck breaking ride.
I was terrified about the ride, but had to carry on with my brothers. I was stepping into my seat when my brother freaked me out with his eyes, because he knew I was scared. But too late, the man in charge pushed his index finger on the button - and we were off!!