These are my detailed sentences:
One hot summers day, Mr S’s groups were excited to go to the pools.
As I hopped into the pools, I immediately started to shiver and I stood frozen like an ice block.
We started with our hands at the bottom of the board and our legs kicking fast for a warm
While catching my breath, a bit of water went into my mouth and I choked.
Walking into the toilets, it smelt like chlorine and chemicals.