Friday, February 22, 2013

Iron swimming


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These are my detailed sentences:

One hot summers day, Mr S’s groups were excited to go to the pools.

As I hopped into the pools, I immediately started to shiver and I stood frozen like an ice block.

We started with our hands at the bottom of the board and our legs kicking fast for a warm
up.

While catching my breath, a bit of water went into my mouth and I choked.

Walking into the toilets, it smelt like chlorine and chemicals.

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