Monday, February 20, 2012

Introductions to Hook in My Audience

I am learning to write an introduction that hooks in my audience.Here are 3 versions .
Which do you like the best and why ?

1. I knew that me as a kid needs 9 to 10 hours of sleep. So I go to bed extremely early.Then Monday morning comes around, and I'm not tired at all.

2. 40 out of 52 Mondays I struggle to get up for school . I Imagine waking up for 52 Mondays every year , I would probably faint. Monday mornings just kill my beauty sleep.

3. Monday Mornings are so hard to get up because you feel so tired after your weekends, especially when you've just had your friends over. I have to get out of bed though, and get changed for school.

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