On our way to the Motat a little jingle went up my spine and I remembered how fun it was the last time I came. It was spectacular, amazing and most brilliant.
Me, my brother, Mum, Dad and little sister were going on Highway 1 to Motat, but then we turned to pick up my cousins Selila and Sam. We were going to Motat to enjoy the holiday.
Erene
Your phrase "a little tingle went up my spine" is a great way to express that exciting feeling when you are anticipating something, well done.
ReplyDeleteI would have liked to see some of Motat in your animation as it was the topic of your recount. That would have hooked me in even more as your audience.
I look forward to your next piece of work on the blog Erene.