tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847060631314736153.post7419052914313827523..comments2023-10-26T22:42:59.543+13:00Comments on Flying High: Jeyan's Birthday at the PoolsMiss Gardenlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12604939987572422670noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847060631314736153.post-81309772069002021102010-03-05T12:20:56.655+13:002010-03-05T12:20:56.655+13:00Happy late 10th birthday Jeyan
That was a very go...Happy late 10th birthday Jeyan<br /><br />That was a very good animation about when you went to the pools for your birthday.What did you get for your birthday? I hope you had a great time playing with your friends. What games did you play? We are very happy that you had a very good birthday.<br /><br />KEEP UP THE EXCITING ANIMATIONS!!!Awhina/Andrewnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847060631314736153.post-37253380887814223892010-02-16T12:16:45.144+13:002010-02-16T12:16:45.144+13:00Happy 10th bithday Jeyan! Did you have fun when yo...Happy 10th bithday Jeyan! Did you have fun when you played hide & seek? it looked cool.Kobehttp://pesroom12and13.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2847060631314736153.post-18445796418110490062010-02-10T19:53:52.732+13:002010-02-10T19:53:52.732+13:00An exclamation is a great way to begin a "wow...An exclamation is a great way to begin a "wow" introduction. <br />When I read your first few recount sentences I am a bit distracted by the repeating of some words. Perhaps instead of using "my friends" again, you could use the pronoun "they".<br />I'm glad you had a great birthday Jeyan.Miss Gardenhttp://pesroom12and13.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com