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Tuesday, September 1, 2009

Rita's New Ending

We have been learning about the structure of narrative stories and
this is Rita's own ending to Little Red Riding Hood.
If you need a reminder or the story orientation and complication click on this link to see the trailer to our resolution writing.
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7 comments:

  1. Room 12September 1, 2009 at 9:54 PM

    Hi there Rita! I really enjoyed your ending to this well known story! I especially liked the description you used. I had a real image in my head what was going on because of adjectives and adverbs you decided to use.

    Would you and your class mind if we used your starter as a prompt with one of our writing groups? We could share what we come up with...

    Let us know what you think - email Mrs Bee cbuist@stclair.school.nz

    Your Dunedin Fans will keep watching! Keep up the great work!

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  2. AshleighSeptember 3, 2009 at 10:07 AM

    Hi Rita
    I liked your new ending.I also loved your image you drew.It was verry
    detailed.Lucky the wolf didn't eat you up.

    From Ashleigh

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  3. Randella rm6September 11, 2009 at 12:15 PM

    Randella Room 6,

    I love the picture that u took but it would be beter if you had a podcast .Keep p the good work.

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  4. MakeritaSeptember 16, 2009 at 12:45 PM

    Hi Rita,
    You are such a mean artist.
    Keep up your super work.

    Makerita

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  5. MakeritaSeptember 17, 2009 at 9:45 AM

    Hi Rm 12,
    Thanks for the interesting comment.It is so long.I love your comment very much.About that question sure it's alright.

    Makerita

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  6. MakeritaSeptember 17, 2009 at 9:49 AM

    Hi Ashleigh,
    Thank-you for the comment.I love your comment as well.

    Rita

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  7. MakeritaSeptember 17, 2009 at 9:54 AM

    What's up Randella,
    your comment is fantastic for a year two.Keep up your wonderful comments.

    Makerita

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